Thank you for applying.
I've seen your test and it's really good..
Just a few things that you have to remember.
1. Well, I don't know whether you are using Topaz Denoise or Smart Blur, but you mustn't overuse it because it will become too blurry (like E-1 and A). Image B is perfect and not blurry.
2. If the RAW is tankoubon (like B&E), it is a must to level the white part become really white. Image B still need a bit of leveling, but E-1 is good in term of leveling.
3. While cleaning the text, make sure all the text is covered with white brush. Because if not there will be some left in the bubble like in image B.
4. And the last is the dust. After leveling, there will be some dust left (like E-2) and just use white brush to brush it. It's not major because we can clean it while QC-ing.
For the color page it's pretty and I think it's your best result.
Anyway, you passed.
Please check your PM.