Well, I think it's better than your test result.
You don't need to use different font on every different dialogue.
What you've done on these 2 pages is really nice.
I can understand that you seemed haven't found the fitting font yet.
I will give you some list of font that you might need to have while typesetting.
Dialogue bubble : AnimeAce / Wild Words / CC Jim Lee - for all genre. I prefer Wild Words or AnimeAce though, yet it's only my personal preference.
Narration or background text : Felt - usually for shoujo manga ; Italic form the dialogue bubble - usually for shounen manga.
Small text : Augie, Blambot custom, etc - for all genre.
Scary SFX (something like Orochimaru evil laugh) : YouMurderer, Acquaintance, Blood Sucker.
Other SFX : any font is OK depend on the situation though.
Anyway, you've passed the test!
I will notify Skylar and she will PM you about your first project.
She is a little bit busy with her new job though, so maybe she will PM you in 1-2 days.